Hi Lucas I saw your blog post about the slide show that you made but you forgot to add a title and a slide show. You need a lot of punctuation in your blog post and you have to add what you learnt. One more thing you could explain what your slide show is about. Have a listen to your blog post. I can help to put your slideshow to blog post if want. Bye
Hey Lucas, I had a look through your blog to comment on and I saw this one. You don't have a title and the video isn't there. Also you punctuation is out of line. I can help to add the video if you want. I am really excited to watch!! Bye
Hi Lucas there nothing to see here so can you put some work there about what you did.
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Hi lucas i know that on this post you hadn't try'd hard enough. and whaea becks will be very dissepointed in you from jack
ReplyDeleteI lucas but we can't see the slide show? Can you please fix it up.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucas I saw your blog post about the slide show that you made but you forgot to add a title and a slide show. You need a lot of punctuation in your blog post and you have to add what you learnt. One more thing you could explain what your slide show is about. Have a listen to your blog post.
ReplyDeleteI can help to put your slideshow to blog post if want.
Bye
Hey Lucas,
ReplyDeleteI had a look through your blog to comment on and I saw this one. You don't have a title and the video isn't there. Also you punctuation is out of line. I can help to add the video if you want.
I am really excited to watch!!
Bye