In Te Maunga we have be writing a story called ghost and Were writing what happened at the end of the story. The end of the story there was a gunshot because ghost was in a race. I will Share to you my story now.
IALT: I am Learning to Use punctuation.
Boom!! ‘The gun was like a silver superhero flying in the air and it Went to the sky To save the world . The bullet could go anywhere It Could Fall on me!” so I ran away, like I was being chased,
My lungs are popping. A puddle of sweat around me. I was melting Like an ice block on a hot day.
I felt like my legs had one job and that job was to run.. Brandan was in The lead so l told Lu “Let's go as fast as we can. We need to win. Brandon I going to win”
“NO I am going to win and Your dumb little friend will Lose too” Brandon Replied.
I am a cheater Zooming around the track. Energy got inside of me I didn't win Or Brandon. Lu won the race we are so Happy for him. I Guess he should have won.
