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Wednesday, July 26, 2017

The Snake in the Box

          We are learning to write using our imagination.



Long ago in Egypt lived an evil Dr with shiny silver hair and red eyes.He built a tele portor brought an evil alien to earth because he wanted to rule the world. The alien looked lie a snake and the Dr locked it in a box.Two bad twins let the snake in the box free and the snake went after the twin and she jumped like a rabbit  Then the Dr made a super hot taco. He  gave it to the slimy fat snake. Gulp, the snake ate it whole.cooltext247014798145824 (1).gif! He roared. Then the fat snake went on a rampage. The snake ate half a building and the building caught on fire because the snake could now breathe fire!
Now the snake started having little snake babies and they started destroying the city as well.
The snake was really an alien in disguise! The snake smashed into a school library with his slippery claws. He ate the librarian and her lunchbox as well. The principal said “Oh no, the poor !” Everybody wondered why the principal didn’t care about the librarian but the librarian was really just a mannequin not a real person and the principal was really one of the twins in disgui The twins had put a bomb inside the mannequin, it exploded inside the snake, and the library became a sea of slippery gloopy slime. It gave the twins goosebumps.

It looked like a pyramid of slime. Hurray, the twins had saved the day!

7 comments:

  1. Hi Lucas good story i think you need to fix up some words

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  2. cool Lucas I like it

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  3. Hi lucas you have to fix your story it don't sound write

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  4. Hi Lucas I liked your story about the evil Egyptian Dr. I liked the part about the alien snake. I liked it because you described the characters and you used onomatopoeia. I really liked your imaginative story.

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  5. Hi Lucas
    I really like your story of an evil Dr. When I was reading it I found some letters missing from words and spelling mistakes and I’m not so sure that you should add cool text. How do you find cool text?
    See you later
    Franky

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